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poem 6-15-10 In the night there is the dark in the dark there is a shark in the shark there is me what I say is, 'in the shark it is very dark" when really I'm wearing smething on my eyes on my eyes is something black it could b a money sack.

5-20-10 memior OH MY GOD I FOUND A SEGWAY. No I really didn't find a segway ajust wanted your attention. I want to tell you about a WHITE ALLIGATOR!!!!

It all started when my 4th grade class went to the maretime aquarium. when I saw it, it was pearly white and had red eyes. I'll never forget it.

5-6-10 Remington Frederic Remington was born on Oct. 4, 1861 in Canton, New York. He absolutely loved the West. His first job after his brief studies at Yale was an illustrator for a magazine. That gave him his first chance to go to the West to start his artistic career. Those are the main parts of Frederic Remington's life. 4-28-10 poetry reveiw personally I think that the poetry on that website was pretty good.the one I read was called death in the suburbs. It had death, happiness, and a whole lot of sadness. If any body were to read they would say it is nice.

4-5-10 Poem The taco is tasty,

The taco is fresh,

The taco is pasty,

and it is made of mesh.

Oh how try to make it tasty ,

but in the end, it will come out pasty.

When the they come out as hard as a rock,

I make sure I call my friend Brock.

He will take them with much, much joy,

they end up being a huggable toy!!!!!!!

St. Patrick's day 3-21-10 "Today is St. Patricks day and my mom is making me... OH MY GOD, I FOUND A LEPERCHAUN!!!!!!!" I said. "Great," he said, "now here's your gold so get off of ME!!!!! Now thinking to myself, I wonder what I should do with this pot of gold.

First off, I am deffinetley buying a boat. I could go boating out on lake Quasapaug. I could catch some big fish in it. I could even dive into the water off the boat.

Secondly, I should by some video games. One of the best sytems is the X box 360. A game for it is Halo 3. There is also Modern warfare 2 for the X box 360.

Finnally, I would want to buy a house. It is going to come with lots of yummy food like soda, churros, and danishes. It i going to be big for special party circumstances. And it will need to be near a beach so I can park my boat there.

When I finnally reach my house My siblings say, "MORE GOLD!!!" "You have gold too???" I say, "What did you do with it???" "WE BOUGHT CHURROS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Favorite movie 2-3-10 My favorite movie of all time is //Malibu Shark Attack//!!! This is because there are ancient sharks that try to devour all of the lifeguards on the beach after a freak tsunami. To stay alive, the lifeguards have to get to a Job site that is high enough out of the water to escape the flood water from the tsunami. Also, they have to kill all of the sharks that they find using gear like gas and flare guns, nailguns, and chain saws. In the end, only 5 out of 11 people survived.

paragraph 1 The legend of Phil On my treacherous journey through the Amazon jungle, I seemed to have picked up an unexpected passenger. When I was about to consume my much required lunch, a magical banana named Phil fell out of a tree. Suddenly, a really, really fat monkey fell out of a tree and then started to chase our good friend Phil.

paragraph 2 The Legend of Phil Believe it or not, but the banana was actually starting to battle back. He started to pulverize the monkey with his peelings. Then the monkey was getting really drowzy from his lack of potassium. The monkey had to end the brawl quick, or perish!!!! So he swiped the ripe, juicy banana off the ground, and at that note, Phil was devoured...

paragraph 3 The Legend Of Phil BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh my god, the fat monkey blew up!!! After the foggy smoke drifted away I saw my good friend Phil cheering that Faticus's reign of terror was over. He explained that the fat monkey that just blew up was an evil emperor putting all the bananas in the cherio mines. He said since I freed his people he would give me one wish. I knew what my wish was going to be instantly.

EPILOUGE I wished for something that would truly make my life soar, I wished that Phil had a free trip to china. Later, I one the, "Best Video In The World" award because Ifimed the ENTIRE scene of Phil being attacked. I'm rich!!!!

Paragraph 2 feed back

Everything you guys said is probably true. I was good with the action verbs but I skipped over a lot of parts by mistake. I hope later that I can make a new revision of the story.

Wiki reflection 1-7-10

The things that are good about the wiki are how it's really easy to log on to. Another thing is how you can get information on where you went wrong in your piece. Also, you can write stories about anything you want if it's apropriate.

Though, somethings are bad about the wiki. If you accidentelly tell your password to someone, they can edit all of your writing and frame you for something they did. If you write it down on a piece of paper and lose that paper, you have to go through the long process of changing your username and password. Besides that, every thing about the wiki is really awesome!!!

3-3-10

The boy cried and screamed wolf. His sister came and cried because they were out of hot chocolate. The wolf clawed and bit them. They were going to put marshmallows on him. The wolf got scared and ran far away to his cave house. The boy went home and took a nap. He woke u​p a really small black mouse. Then he figured out he was a black bear that would eat anything it saw. He was hungry for some wolves, so he went to go look for some food. He went to get some takeout when he got a deadly heart attack that made him choke and get his voice from Dr. Noodle. He was saved!

But what he didn't know was that Dr.Noodle was a mad scientist that turned regular humans and animals into cartoons for his T.V. show called //__Dibby Peanut and the Quest for Chicken__//. So when the bear/boy was healed, they were mutated also. It is the end for the child sadly. Or so they think??? DEH DEH DEH!!!!!

The girl was having some oatmeal at Her favorite restaurant called Little Miss Muffet's when the air had gotten chilly. She realized what was happening when she heard foot steps behind her. "Oh my god" she said when she saw a dark figure walking toward her carrying something like an axe. As she prepared herself for the contact of the blade, she was only able to utter a single word//. " NOODLE!!!!!!!!" //